Panel 2

Cut to an alleyway outside a Wack Donald’s restaurant—we see the famous Wack Donald’s "W", which is nothing at all like an inverted pair of golden arches. A teenaged boy dressed in the uniform of a Wack Donald’s employee is dragging a large, black (full) trash bag. He is looking over his shoulder.

Midori: (voiceover) I wish I could get a job at Wack Donald’s.

Panel 3

Close-up of the Wack Donald’s employee. He is looking to the side and reacting, startled, to a sound.

Sound effect: *Snick.*

Panel 4

Takahashi splattering blood panel—except this time it’s not going to turn out to be a near miss.

Panel 5

View of the alleyway outside Wack Donald’s. The boy now lies on the ground—we just see his legs—with blood pooling and running out of the alley. Next to him is the garbage bag; there is a small dark pool under it, as well.

Page 18

Panel 1

Back at the shrine; the two girls are changing to street clothes. Midori’s hair is now in a very casual, deliberately tousled, style. She is dressing in a snug t-shirt and skirt. We can see her bra, and the waistband of Calvin Klein briefs peeks out above her skirt. She wears a navel ring and sports a small flower tattoo at her waistline. Kasumi, hair in two little pigtails, now wears a short-sleeved "sailor suit" school uniform; she is hanging something on a clothes hanger.

Midori: Tell your aunt she can come lock up.

Kasumi: Wait a minute. I’m still hanging up my kimono.

Panel 2

Close-up of Kasumi; she is hugging herself and looks uneasy.

Kasumi: Does it feel really weird out to you tonight?

Panel 3

Full-figure view of the girls in front of the counter. From this view, we can see an oldish computer behind the desk—old for 2001, even; remember we’re in 2009 here), as well as the rack with the keychains, another rack full of ofuda—those scroll things Miroku uses as an offensive weapon—some more brochures, and some price tags. Midori wears fishnet stockings, a very short skirt—Kagome level—and high platform shoes. Kasumi’s uniform skirt is a bit longer, and she wears tight knee socks with more moderate platform shoes.

Midori: It always feels weird here. This place is so spooky.

Kasumi: We’re going! Goodnight, Auntie!

 

 

 

Panel 4

Long view of the girls coming out of the shrine office.

Kasumi: Let’s hurry. Aren’t you creeped out?

Midori: You’re always getting creeped out.

Panel 5

Close-up of the girls’ feet. They are passing the alley by Wack Donald’s; we can see the rivulet of blood on the ground.

Midori: See? Almost to the train.

Kasumi: I hate that dark alley by Wack Donald’s.

Don’t Cry: It’s Alternate Page 14!

Panel 1

Close-in shot of Kagome cradling the human Inuyasha in her arms. They look into one another’s eyes.

Inuyasha: Kikyou…is she…gone?

Kagome: She’s gone.

Panel 2

Profile view of Inuyasha and Kagome, looking at one another. Both are wide-eyed and open-mouthed.

Panel 1

Full-figure shot. Inuyasha is lying on the ground, smiling, pulling a surprised-looking Kagome down on top of him. Her hair is flying upward from the motion; so is her skirt, revealing her lacy panties. Her loose-socked legs are thrashing a bit. Inuyasha’s right hand is cupping her left breast, and his left hand is planted firmly on her sweet little 16-year-old virgin tush.

Inuyasha: YEEE-HAAAW!

 

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